I'm back! And so are Charna and Fyline. I love how this page came out. You guys, I have so much planned for the people in this comic. You're going to love it when it gets rolling. I'd also like to thank Betsy for modeling for Fyline. If all goes well, she'll become a regular.
Vote for Nadya at Buzzcomix OR TWC and see a cute drawing of Nadya, and the answers to 'Ask Nadya!':
I don't recognize Charna as young woman, though I like the black arm. You rendered her very good looking but the clothing choices seem out of character, too modern day. Have you noticed that your figures all seem stretched, like they are 90% horizontal and 110% vertical. Your dialog is great, giving hints to their personalities and inner thoughts.
Ha, Charna looks so annoyed. I like the red hair. She should definitely be a regular if for no other reason than the hair ^.^ You did a particularly nice job on the sky in the last panel.
Why pity? How else would a human being react to what just happened than with confusion? But oh well, I'm human, how can I understand immortals? ;) Great job on the coloring, you're getting better and better at that with each page - and you're a pro as it is.
Thanks for the heads up Dom.
Damn what a sweet looking page. They keep getting prettier.
I love the the first line. "I'm trying not to pity her, but it's tough!"
Speaks volumes about her personality.
Beautiful job.
